Daydream Believer

Shine-free

Speck of light

What made you fade to such a grey muted tone?

Forsaken and alone

Constrained to manifest within your own dismal shadow

Don’t you see the potential in that glimmer which glints a hint of what could be?

If only you would let your light shine-free

Comments4

  • Saxon Crow

    Could it be a cloud of doubt just drifting by?

    • Daydream Believer

      It just might be that Saxon Crow. Thank you for reading and leaving me a comment

    • Fay Slimm.

      Excellent - - a poet's poem indeed - - into my list of favourites with this little gem .

      • Daydream Believer

        Fay, thank you ever so much for kindly adding this little piece to you favourites. I am smiling, so pleased you enjoyed it

      • Goldfinch60

        That light is there for all of us, follow it to your wonderful future.

        Andy

        • Daydream Believer

          Andy thank you so much, it is there, we just sometimes need to believe in ourselves a bit more. Thank you so much for commenting on my work

          DB

        • FallenAngel1🕊

          This speaks volumes,..to me. Beautiful!🌟🌟🌟🌹🏆😋

          • Daydream Believer

            Wow thanks so much for such lovely words 🙏😊🌷



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