I do not ask you to save me
Do not expect compassion
Never ever count on
You being there for me
I just want to follow
In your footsteps
Be fed by the crumbs
That fall from your table
Revel in the aura
That surrounds you
Help you carry
Your heavy cross
- Author: Alfred Peyer (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: March 20th, 2020 21:15
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments3
Very poignant, Fred.
Thanks so much Kurt!
A poignant write Fred. In Christianity, though, yes, it is a 'religion', there is the theme of us needing be to saved from our sins.
Then Jesus says to His disciples (Christian believers) 'IF any one will follow me, let him/her take up their cross daily'. So there's no forcing in it, with that 'if'.
From a non-religious view, we could call the current situations 'our heavy cross to bear', though not with the same meaning as in a religious sense - if you see what I mean.
Thanks Orchie,
I do see what you mean. I guess what I was trying to say is that one can be a good person without being part of a religion. One can believe in and doing good without being 'saved'.
Oh, this is getting too heavy for me, especially in the early morning! 🙂
You got headache, thinking of all this in the early morning? It was probably early evening here in UK, when you wrote it!
Super write Fred.
Thanks so much Michael!
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