Still trying Mr Lee

Poetic Dan



Do we all have this feeling inside "if not for me, it would not get done" but do any of us give 100% to everything or everyone.



I figured if you do, maybe your not really human!



A transformer sent down from Cybertron.



For only a mechanical organism can truly switch emotions off



Where memories of rivers past, no longer flow to the heart.



We should lay no expectations on each others path

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 24th, 2020 05:22
  • Comment from author about the poem: Letting go of some emotional waves in riding!... The song is explicit but the Corus is worth it. Much peace and respect.
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  • Saxon Crow

    Good poem Dan - If i were a transformer I'd be soundwave!!

    • Poetic Dan

      Yeah my son would be megaton, Optimus Prime I'm is my hero, although really deep down. I'm a ninja turtle, cowabunga dude!

      Always appreciate your time my friend, in joy the sun 😉

    • Amon

      I feel relieved of some pounds - Good thing Dan

      • Poetic Dan

        Ha ha, didn't mean to bring out a sweat but there was a lot of emotional energy behind this!

        Thanks for the vibe
        Always appreciate your time

        Keep up the write

      • dusk arising

        I reckon that if you can give 100% of yourself to a task then you must have a simple life. Most people have lives which tug them this way and that. i.e. i must get this task over by 3.45 so that i can get nappies for my daughter on the way home etc.

        • Poetic Dan

          Ha ha, as I just read biscuit poetry comment. I then come back to yours thinking the same thing... Funny all this started over naps, but not about shops. We do reusable one (90%) so a washing every two days is a must!

          This was written that we all do what we do and hopefully find someone that does what I don't, but then got lost in other emotions of others expectations of me..

          Didn't mean to go on lol
          Overtired ramblings

        • PoeticBiscuit

          The first few lines hold so much truth. Well written as always my friend.

          -PB

          • Poetic Dan

            Ah, yes it came me after a debate in my own head about washing up and washing nappies. We all play our roll.

            Good to see you my friend
            Keep safe

          • Goldfinch60

            All we can do is what we are able to do at the time, but we must always be there for ourselves and each other.

            Andy



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