Revived.
A lust full of Karma passed
and eagerness lessened.
The honey- moon of strong passion
a weaker light shed.
Love turned to pages of lies until
cage ajar the bird fled.
Revived was intent for new appetite
and gone was pretense.
Lit again female eyes felt inner hunger
which quenched neglect.
Prized then the nectar fired by another
with not an inch of regret.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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A fine write Fay.
Erm, I didn't get the hang of things. I said 'Who's Karma? (lol).
Angela here - Just finished my Shift (Orthopedic Ward) and checking MPS ! This is an interesting Poem for US in the first flush of married LOVE ! Loving each other seems natural and smooth and consumation beautiful & coordinated ! We can relate to the first three lines ! Lines 4 & 5 frighten me but we know that could never happento us ! We anticipate that in 2070 (When Im 82 & Brian is 86) our love will be just a joyful - but less gymnastic ! Thanks for caring & sharing - AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛💛💛💛
Each love is different isn't it. Maybe more learned as we realise how resilient we can be.
The pleasure love brings to the bells and whistles of life does indeed encourage us to dip the toe in when the water looks freshly inviting.
Wonderful words Fay.
Andy
Beautiful words, a lovely write
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