Fear of Haiku
I remember when
You struggled with the concept of haiku
When senryu made you sweat
I suspect that you suspect
I remember that too
Is that why we are still strangers
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Author:
Neville (
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Ha - this hits the nail on the head - -
- that's the way it is with short things monsieur - --- but then poetry can often make friends out of strangers methinks...............
Are you ever wrong, nah.. I doubt it .... cheers Fay x
I loves having me a go at poetry see.... but i cants do the math for they haiku and that .. innit?
dont knock yourself... I am a fan and true ...... and I ain’t just talkin hot or cold air.... stay safe mate....
Neville
Who are Haiku and Senryu? You can see I'm not a cultured poet! lol.
you are of course write... you are more of a cultured pearl... stay safe my furry four footed friend..
Good Evening NEVILLE ~ Its not the HAIKU or SENRYU or TANKAS (5 7 5 7 7) Im scared of ~ in fact they can be good fun and long Poems are not appreciated on MSN ! What scares ME is that even on a freewheelin* - easy goin* - come-day go-day SITE like MPS there are Purists ~ WHO if you lable a POEM a HAIKU (5 7 5 & about Nature & Seasons etc ?) or a SENRYU (5 7 5 about People & emotions etc ?) they will inform you that its either wrong Syllable countwise or Subjectwise etc etc. This can put budding Poets off and they leave MPS and give up Poetry. I notice that much Published Poetry in Languages other than English dont follow the 5 7 5 syllabus rule so it seems like a *Free for All* out there ~ thanks for sharin* & carin*
Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Yours BR IAN & ANGELA !
thank you for visiting my little scribble... it is genuinely appreciated.. I am quite strict when it comes to penning these poetic forms.. however, I tend to refer to many of mine as mocku's or fakehu's if they are not quite the real thing.... stay safe the pair of ya.....
Neville
Good fun write Neville.
I write haikus, senryus and tankas and have done for long while but try to keep them in the sense they were meant to be taken.
I also write goldikus and wordikus if I want to do something different and have any type of meaning.
Andy
Tanka's a million my fine feathered friend.. I bet your goldicus go down a tweet... Cheers Andy .. and stay safe
Neville
Thankiku for bringing a smiliku to my face Neville.
Andy
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