Is There Anyone There
There
Is someone knocking
But there is no one home
There
Is someone calling
On a disconnected phone
Talk
About freedom but
There is nowhere to roam
I
Really must get out of here
I need some space I got to leave
Remove
Your heart from that well-worn sleeve
You talk about pain but you never seem to bleed
Hello
Can you hear me
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Comments5
Neville,
I can hear you...
Loud and clear!
~Laura~🌻
Bless you my dear friend, your visits are always welcome ... thank you so much for your ongoing encouragement and support.............Stay safe n well during these difficult times....
Neville
Clever this lead-up to saying goodbye to a dying romance but trying to get in touch seems impossible at times like these - love those last lines Nev - - such an original take on how to go separate ways.
Good to have you here my friend.... appreciate you visiting and muchly so....
Neville
So many out there paying lip-service in so many ways. A feature of today's society.
But when we see so many following wealthy organised religions (google how wealthy is the roman catholic church for example) who put such stead in a book which states "it is easier for a camel to pass through the eye of a needle than for a rich man to enter the kingdom of heaven" is it any wonder?
I really like the format as it builds in drama. Love the question contained.
I appreciate the way you consider many of my scribbles DA... thank you so bloomin much for the ongoing support and encouragement....
Neville
A fine write Neville.
And 'Cooeee' do ya hear me? Are ya there?!
loud and clear my little guinea pig..... cheers oh' Orchidee
N... 🙂
I would be there, wouldn't I? I'm always there - as a pest?! lol.
There are many out there who can hear and appreciate your words Neville and I am certainly one of them.
Andy
How very bloomin kind... Bless ya boots GF60
Neville
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