Fay Slimm.





Happy the trees birds choose to nest in.

Dancing the branches supporting first trills.


Glad every leaf that shields yearly matings.

Pleasured each twiglet to hold nestlings safely.


Delighted that writer who lingers to stare.

Enchanted a mind which sees life everywhere.


  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 10th, 2020 03:10
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 45
  • User favorite of this poem: dusk arising.


  • orchidee

    A truly enchanting write Fay. We're 'seeing' nature more these days, hopefully, if only from our gardens in some cases.

    • Fay Slimm.

      Very true Orchi - if only from the garden we can see many natural things taking place - - so pleased you thought the write enchanting and thank you for your encouraging comment.

    • Alan .S. Jeeves

      An enchanting write Fay.

      Ex animo, Alan

      • Fay Slimm.

        Thank you Alan - I imagined the scene I tried to personify would appeal to you.........

      • SerenWise

        Simple and beautiful!

        • Fay Slimm.

          Gratefully appreciated Seren.

        • Goldfinch60

          Beautiful wards and picture Fay. New life is so precious.


          • Fay Slimm.

            I guessed you would relate to my few lines dear Andy - - Nature is there to teach us all much.

          • dusk arising

            This is just such pleasure, so pleasing to read and i'll bet it gave you much pleasure to see what you had written.

            A favourite for sure.

            • Fay Slimm.

              Yes you are so right dear friend - I do take pleasure in thinking latterly and with this write my mind was alive with how inanimate life must consort with other forms of nature - -- thank you kindly for adding this piece to your list of faves.

            • Neville

              impossible to read without the corners of me mouth movin heavenward and showing off my crow's-feet big time..... this is smashin Fay...….


              • Fay Slimm.

                Yes smiles of agreement mean methinks that we can relate to what we read. Those little creases you call crow's feet mon ami are known as laugh- lines revealing warm hearts - - Keep staying safe and well wont you ?

              • ANGELA & BRIAN

                Angela Here - Ahhhhhhh FAY the many many Glories of Spring - Birds & Bird Song & Fledglings. We inherited four Birdboxes with our New Home. We cleaned them up amd replaced them ! Now we have ROBINS - nesting in one & BLUE TITS in another. We see this as a sign that we will be very happy here ! Love the visual & Poem - thanks for Caring !

                Blessings & Peace & Joy
                Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛

                • Fay Slimm.

                  How exciting to get birds choosing your boxes and may their new nestlings bring you more happy moments out in you garden........... keep taking care dear duo.

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