Revealed.
Midnight, sipping on anger uncorks feelings.
Hours of relentless thought before depth
of rancour revealed.
Alone, daunting re-view enlivens nostalgia.
Caught in blighted self pity love writhes
in abject unbalance.
Belief, maturing slowly releases candour.
Seeds which tear-sieved start to open
as desire over-plants.
New-charged, hoarded mistrust recedes.
With ego's demise acceptance defines
what the future will be.
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Fay Slimm. (
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BRIAN HERE ~ *All alone again naturally* ANGEL is back on the Front Line. COVID 19 is taking its toll on us all ! As you imply *QUE SERA SERA* ! COVID 19 has opened Pandoras Box & released into our Souls ~ Relentless thought ~ Candour ~ Abject Unbalance ~ Tear sieved seeds & Mistrust ~ QUE SERA SERA ! Mis Otis & I regret we*re unable to post today !
Love - Peace & Joy
B & A 💛💛💛💛💛
Yes I agree Pandoras box is truly open but we will succeed if we all take care to stay safe and well - - blessings to Angela as she fiights in front lines - thank you dear Brian for the read and this comment.
Do I read betrayal of the most sacred trust revealed here.
A hurt so personal. A hurt which could only be inflicted by the most important person in one's life. No other hurt could cut so deeply. Cutting through bonds as it stabs to the heart, killing a flame kindled for years. Nothing compares to the anguish of the moments of accepting this worst of all treachery is a certainty.
And then of course the "what do I do now" situation to be addressed.
All there in your words today, all the more vivvid to those who've worn the T-shirt.
Your words almost hit the mark in this generous comment D.A. -- appreciated so much your continued encouragement,
A fine write Fay.
Many thanks Orchi.
Ouch... this is so good, it hurts....
Neville
Ha - -After reading your comment I am smiling here big-time - - have read it twice over and chuckle each time - - very big thank you and hope now the "hurt" has subsided.................. x
...and that future will be beautiful!
We certainly hope it will dear friend............ thanks a load Fred for your visit and read.
The hurts from the past will be healed from the trip into a wonderful future Fay.
Wonderful emotive write.
Andy
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