The training wheels were removed before I was ready,
I began confidently peddling down a long narrow path that was rocky, yet still, I luckily remained steady.
I used my breaks too often, in fear I may fall down
I have had one too many scares the more I slowed, so breaking was keeping me from becoming a letdown.
I had received good feedback, "Keep peddling, you're almost there!"
but every time I stopped to look around all I could smell was fear in the air.
I became intolerable for myself to handle on this long ride,
what if I never figure out where I am? I am lost without a guide.
As soon as I start to peddle fast again,
The smell is quite different, it wreaks of beauty and it washes away my pain.
I still have not made it to the place I want to be,
but the reward isn't making it to my goaled destination, it's breathing in the fulfillment of being happily free.
- Author: Trinity Franklin (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: April 22nd, 2020 20:37
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments1
Trin, this is a great metaphor of life. As for 'I am lost without a guide', just remember if you don't know where you are going you cannot get lost! 🙂
Truly enjoyed reading your poem!
I appreciate the feedback!!
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