Closeness.

Fay Slimm.

 

 

How fragile the thread which binds
souls to this earth.
Does the end as ties break preserve
nothing save name?
Will need be extinguished as demise
re-claims words ?
When amour says Goodbye remains
closeness the same ?

 

YET 

Love will send music  from eternity's
anthem 

AND

Learning its language makes contact       
triumphant.

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Comments5

  • dusk arising

    I've thought about this quite a lot as i am a believer in reincarnation and the spiritual existence before reincarnation. I believe we have a limited awareness as conscious beings, this is in fact established fact as it is proven our brain patterns/waves change in sleep and slumber and indeed in prayer. Grief and loss are conscious brain feelings. If one prays in a state of grief then temporarily the feeling is lifted away because our brain waves changed pattern.
    So what does the spirit see once it has passed from this plane of existence. Well, more clearly one hopes but whether the ability to 'see' or pass 'things' to those still in this existence is actually there.... who knows?.... it is romantic and poetic to play with hopes and feelings in this sphere for our wishes and desire run wild. I'm not sure whether this makes any sense to you ..... i am no fine wordsmith and i find words get awfully clumsy in these subjects.

  • Poetic Dan

    Wow...

  • ANGELA & BRIAN

    Good Evening FAY - Brian here. Thanks for an inspiring Poem ! We have all lost Loved Ones close to US and in my case mainly 50+ but some (due to accidents etc) much younger. Also those esecially close (Members of MY Extended Family & Church Friends) have all had an Assurance of Eternal Life. So I know where they are - in Heaven - and even though I cant communicate with them (I dont accept Spiritualism) I can feel their presence ! Additionally I know that I will meet them again some day when I pass over into the Spiritual Dimension - OK. Angela & I are apprehensive about the uncertain times in which we live especially as she is working in the Hospital. But we do know that should one of us DIE Prematurely (before we are 70 ! Our Ruby Wedding is 2060 !) we will be reunited again in GLORY ! We do visit the Graves of Loved Ones in Essex not to communicate but just to show they are still really loved - AMEN ! I hope that helps ?

    Blessings & Peace & Joy
    Love Brian & Angela 💛💛💛

  • Goldfinch60

    Loves music is within us all only some do not share it. Good write Fay.

    Andy

  • MendedFences27

    O.M.G. Love, Music, and the Afterlife. Interwoven into this short question of their connection. Of the three, Love is the eternal one. It is the soul, the spirit, and the only survivor of Man's existence. Really enjoyed this one Fay. - Phil A.



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