Lingering
on the branch
reluctant to leave
stay
just a bit
a little bit longer
Yet
it is time
to let go
Slowly
unwillingly
opened her hands
lonely
beautifully
gone with the wind
Looking back affectionately
whispering softly
to her love
"Goodbye"
Delicate flower
scattered into petals
dancing the last dance
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Author:
myself and me (
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Comments4
That last dance is always so special being left with the hope that another dance will come your way.
Andy
The beauty of nature. Thank you. MM
An absorbing personification and written with such poetic observance I could see those fluttering petals saying their soft goodbyes.
I guess I stare at the Sakura for too long, can't resistant the imagination. Thank you. MM
The last dance is such a wonderful sentiment love the link to nature such a wonderful medium so many meaning here
Very well expressed BRAVO!
Thank you so much for your kind words. I am glad you enjoy it. MM
Lovely ) sad but beautiful
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