myself and me

Last dance


on the branch

reluctant to leave


just a bit

a little bit longer



it is time

to let go



opened her hands



gone with the wind


Looking back affectionately

whispering softly

to her love



Delicate flower

scattered into petals

dancing the last dance


  • Goldfinch60

    That last dance is always so special being left with the hope that another dance will come your way.


    • myself and me

      The beauty of nature. Thank you. MM

    • Fay Slimm.

      An absorbing personification and written with such poetic observance I could see those fluttering petals saying their soft goodbyes.

      • myself and me

        I guess I stare at the Sakura for too long, can't resistant the imagination. Thank you. MM

      • Andrew Charles Forrest

        The last dance is such a wonderful sentiment love the link to nature such a wonderful medium so many meaning here
        Very well expressed BRAVO!

        • myself and me

          Thank you so much for your kind words. I am glad you enjoy it. MM

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          a most tranquil moment in poetry,


          • myself and me

            Do you find the tranquil moment bothering or rather it is what you looking for? Nice to see you showing up.

            • Unsub

              just what I was looking for.


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