Last night Lunar delivered me
A place where I was dancing free
Anonymous and undefined
Wild with possibility
She whispered in my ear
Excitement thrilling, chilling, near
A new dawn could be descending
Full of hope and far from here
De de de. De de de.
A repetitive mechanic jolted me awake
Desperately I fought, what consciousness wished to take
Eyes shut tight, seeking promised land
But instead another dawn drags and scratches at my hand
I mourn my happily ever after
And rise to one more groundhog chapter
Half dead and anticipating end of day
When Lunar promises to entice and play
Why must the morn cut short the seeing
The moment I become my Lunar being?
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sylviasearcher (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This is just light hearted really. Inspired by Unsub's brilliant ode and being woken from a dream I was really enjoying by my alarm...
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Lunar bring you such a wonderful dream. Who wouldn't want to stay there longer?
I am an unapologetic dreamer! Thanks for reading
This write with its lilting pathos must be one of your best yet Sylvia - - I love the flow and rhyme of that final question.
Thank you Fay. I was really uncertain about this one too, so I am glad you liked it
It happens so often that in the realms of a dream heading for that wonderful ending when you awake and the dream remains a figment of imagination. Wonderful words sylvia.
Andy
I sometimes wonder if there is a reason for that. Like I am being shown something by my sub consciousness?
Wow awesome how you liken the dream state to a lunar phase ! A lovely sensational dreamy poem. Kudos.
Plz Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
Thank you for reading. I guess i was being moon struck!
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