Release.
Wilted
has love,
starved
it sickened.
Weight of
result
is now
significant
How often
my heart
saw this
and
sighed.
Does release
feel the
better
for bitter
goodbyes ?
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: May 13th, 2020 02:55
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Comments4
Good write Fay.
Yes.. in a word!... and then NO! For, as you well know, love is too complex for rules.
You teaser! This short piece took some reading. I thought you had lost me with this but i read and re-read until ... well ... to mis-quote a phrase overused by a certain MPS writer 'persistence was key'.
Loves complex nature can give all types of emotions within our hearts.
Andy
Goodbyes oft taste bitter, rarely have I known a sweet one....
well penned my fine literary friend... Neville
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