Zest.
Walking his tight-rope
night falls just when dawn
flutters her eyeshades
and launches first glow.
Glimmers of fervour
force ray-shards to climb
and undress shadows
then zest-halo bursts.
Glinting with shimmer
full-light shakes awake
and gleam stirs desire
for day to wear glitter.
Applauding insistence
I catch dawn's blushing
as she faces Sol's door
with passion unkissed.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Decided to share this slice of surreal fancy to lighten stay-at -home weekenders....... Hope you enjoy.
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Comments4
Ah' I feel like a new man... in an old body.... bless ya dear Fay.. these words are sublime.... N : )
You are so kind mon ami - - that word sublime your comment attached to my posting on Zest lifts my heart and what could be better than to know you meant it........ thank you Nev.............x
Wonderful Fay, such a passionate morning.
Andy
So glad you felt the passion dear Andy
ANGELA HERE - Good Afternoon FAY - Thanks for a wonderful Poem to lift our Spirits on a Boris Blurred Lockdown Sunny Sunday Afternoon !
ZEST is an awesome word almost oneamatopaic ! Lots of synonyms some of SAVOUR (Relish - Flavour - Piquancy) and some of ZING (Gusto - Tang - Joie de Vivre). My MAMA isnt Spanish but she loves Citrus Fruits and grated their rind (ZEST) into Drinks - Puddings - Cakes & Biscuits etc.
Love the similie in the Poem - Dawn as a zest-halo as Hermano Sol bursts through the darkness & the clouds to herald a NEW DAY - AMEN.
We are not posting toay but have posted a New Fusion *What have you Learned from Lockdown ?* Please add a POEM ~ Thanks A !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angel & Brian 💛💛💛
Pleased the read lifted your spirits and thank you for expressing the reasons for liking the piece dear duo.
A zestful write there Fay.
Yes Orchi the word zest says it all and was specially chosen - - thank you for feeling the passion of dawn taking control- -
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