ron parrish aka wordman

rainbows and rain ( almost a haiku



 

If you want a rainbow

you must endure the rain,

if you want love,

you must endure the pain...

 

Comments4

  • ANGELA & BRIAN

    GOOD EVENING RON = Brian Here. Love the Picture & Video ! WE could do with some Rain in Essex ! Weve planted lots of Plants & Veggies in our First Garden and were having to Water every other DAY !
    Love the POEM it is a 6 6 4 6 MANTRA not a 5 7 5 HAIKU ~ OK Thanks for sharing ~ very very TRUE !

    Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
    Love Brian & Angela 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
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  • Laura🌻

    Ron,

    Spot on with your lovely poem!
    Drenched with truth!

    Laura

  • Goldfinch60

    Wonderful write Ron.

    Andy

  • orchidee

    Endure (in poem) or ensure (in comment) the rain? Good write Ron.
    I wouldn't know if it was a Haiku, Mantra, or rice pudding! lol.

    • ron parrish aka wordman

      me either but brian spelled it out for me,,thank you

      • orchidee

        Now we all know! heehee. It's them iambic thingys that get me - whatever they are? Pentameters or summat. We might be using them and not knowing it - under false pretences?! lol.



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