PanAngel16

You Said You Loved Me

The clouds were fluffy

The sky was so blue

You said you loved me

And I had loved you

 

I loved you a lot

So I gave you my heart

I was filled with joy

It was a new start

 

But the clouds are now violent

The sky has turned grey

You left me for her

And you threw me away

 

For a while I felt sad

My heart started to crack

I thought you were the one

But you just held me back

 

Now I feel so free

I never needed you

I thought I did

But I had no clue

 

That I would do great things

Like write poems and stories

That I would have friends

And we’d share our sorrows and worries

 

I have them all now

And I don’t miss you

I’m glad we’re done

With the things we used to do

 

If you do read this

I’m fine and I’m well

Have a good life

And I guess see you in hell

Comments5

  • Neville

    Such is life, such is love, it is a good thing lessons were learnt from this experience....

    Neville

  • Audax

    I can understand the emotion behind this literary piece! Keep expressing your words and talent!

    Please check out my poems!

  • Goldfinch60

    In life there are occasions when the wrong decision is made but in your life you have come to a conclusion that your love was not right and you can move on, this is something that cannot be taught, it is experience and experience cannot be taught but it will, and has, moved you into a better stage in your life. Move forward, there is plenty of wonder out there for you to experience.

    Welcome to MPS.

  • myself and me

    Congratulations, you are out of it. Well penned. Welcome to MPS.

  • Unsub

    Brave write - bravo!

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