You gave me gifts that can't be bought
Explaining how we lost the plot
Would take more words than I have got
Is nothing as it seems
You brought some hope to where was none
When orbiting my setting sun
Then told me that our race was run
Is nothing as it seems
Immaculate your golden glow
A light to blind and overthrow
The darkness I had come to know
Is nothing as it seems
It came up short my very best
Passed the exam but failed the test
A cuckoo in your bustling nest
Is nothing as it seems
A heart that still has songs to sing
Believes love conquers everything
So one day you'll accept my ring
Fulfilling all our dreams
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Author:
peto (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Trying to get back into writing Ta for looking in
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Comments4
seems to me you have successfully got back into writing my friend...
well written and enjoyed…
Neville
Thanks very much Neville
my pleasure my friend... write on
Neville
May that dream come true Peto.
Andy
Maybe one day Andy
Thank you
Well written Neville and a heart warming ending to it! keep up.
Thank you samreen
Stevie
Great writing I especially like the ending verse 🙂
Thank you for looking over these older posts Violet
And leaving such a comment
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