We are made from the different colours of your skin
We each share the breath of life you have freely given
Each loving thought came from your mind first
Each act of our compassion was made to quench your thirst
And then you let us go to play in this world
But we squandered your gifts like a spoilt little child
We tore you apart in misguided vision
Named each part of you as a seperate religion
But still you smile and watch us fall
You don't care about doctrine
As long as we hear your call
You allow us to fight and scream and hurt
Patiently waiting until we have finally learnt
You watch on as we turn away from you
Our loneliness gets deeper until we see what we must do
And there you are with your beating heart
Always shining brightly guiding us through the dark
And that's how i know and have come to see
That your love for us is an endless sea
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This is possibly slightly deeper than the Atlantic Ocean but with clearly visible and dangerous undercurrents...
Neville
Damn it i was aimkng for the pacific. Nothing like rough seas towake you up!
An exquisite poetic prayer that outlines the reasons why wehuman beings need to learn where to find and treasure love that is endless and unjudgemental - --
Thanks Fay but im not holding out for us!
That love is there but it gets confused in all these religious ideals that haunt so many peoples lives.
Andy
You credit him for creation,
I blame him for creating.
He is not the cause
I am for my actions.
Thank you.
An awesome poem to God, I like to think of it meaning the immortal eternal God.
You expressed superbly and outlined straying ways when we get too lost in material worldly pursuits yes. Kudos!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too. Thanks.
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