Falling for Icarus
It was all too easy
Falling in love I mean..
Just look at
those shoulders man
And since he dumped
the excess plumage
Sshh babe, I feel
I might just somehow fly
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Author:
Neville (
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Comments5
Like the racing driver who swerved to avoid a child and fell out of bed i sense someone flying too close to a son here.
I like it DA.. thank you 🙂
Neville
Flying too near the sun whatever the reason results in melt-down where love drowns -- a comforting last line shows someone has reached out with understanding. This write touches the heart Nev.
bless you my lady Fay.... there is a much longer version of this in the making....
Neville
I told him to stay about 93 million miles away from that sun (distance Earth to Sun) but he never listened! lol.
and now of course he never will.... 🙂
May you fly together in love and happiness Neville.
Andy
what a lovely thought.. thank you GF60
Neville
I like the abstraction in this poem, well done
thank you kindly and true
Neville
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