John Prophet

Blend

Harmonious.
One with
creation.
Piece
of the
puzzle.
Unsure.
Unsure
what part.
Creation
within,
beating within.
Coursing
through
each
created part.
Part of the
puzzle.
Part
of the
whole.
Placement
unknown
unsure.
Blended.
All parts
blended.
Flowing
through
origin.
Passing
through being.
Passing one
to the next.
All connected.
One to the
other to
the whole.
Absorb creation
Absorb
it all.
Feel it in
every fiber of
being.
Creation.
Creation
flows one
to the
next.
Connected.
Blended
to the
whole..

 

Comments2

  • Goldfinch60

    That whole is within us all once all the connections are there.

    Andy

    • John Prophet

      Thank you kindly for you time and comment.

    • Unsub

      JP,

      I read this through a few times to see if I got anything deeper within; but I didn't.

      The creation as we are right now is in total chaos & is a corrupt society of people who have forgotten how to love one another. Hate is the creation of humankind at the moment.

      So I really don't want to absorb any of it.

      One to the other to the whole...feels more like one to the other to the HOLE!

      I tried to see some positive in this but this poem does not feel like it is written with a true understanding of life, creation & society right now.

      So it just feels out-dated & a little preachy (is that even a word?)

      I tried,

      sorry,

      Unsub.

      • John Prophet

        Hi Unsub,

        Thank you kindly for reading my work

        JP



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