Star Spangled Soul.

Goldfinch60



As I look up to the stars I know,

I know she is looking down,

Looking down upon me

With the love from eternity

That she has for me,

And I have for her.

That love will never fail

As each night we meet,

We meet as I look up,

Into her star spangled soul.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 9th, 2020 01:16
  • Comment from author about the poem: She is always with me.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 26
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  • orchidee

    You look up to one of the holes in Heaven's floor - the stars? Not my original metaphor, but yours I believe! I read it in one of your poems somewhere.

    • Goldfinch60

      Yes I did write it but i got it from a the film 'The Bucket List'.

      Yes she is in heaven.

      Andy

    • Fay Slimm.

      Love is forever and your words plus the music make that fact so clear - Sincere thanks for this posting.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Fay, my absolute pleasure.

        Andy

      • Neville


        true love transcends both time and space.... and you have an abundance of the former GF60 sir.....

        Neville

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Neville, much appreciated.

          Andy

        • peto

          Pointed, twinkly
          Yep
          You are a star, as was she

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you peto, much appreciated.

            Andy

          • dusk arising

            You lucky man having such a perfect love in your life. Unsurpassable !

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you d a, she always was and always will be.

              Andy

            • ANGELA & BRIAN

              GOOD EVENING UNCE ANDY ~ Angela Here - Relaxing after a hard day PHYSIOING - Brian cooks a mean Ham Carbonara - Teams well with Rioja Tinta ! Thanks for sharing Erroll cool touch ! The piano is an excellent Instrument for cool Jazz because the chording is so easy (9ths 11ths 13ths etc !).
              Love the Poem and the 24/7 Assurance of Your Beloved Joyces presence *Not for the years of Time alone but for Eternity* - AMEN !

              Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
              Love Angela - Brian & Smokey !
              Please check our Poem *We Love Smokey Cat"



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