dusk arising

my breath



let my breath
enter your window
let my love
caress sleeping eyes
let my sorrows
guard the moment
let my distance
be a windblown kiss
let my arms
enwrap your beauty
let my longing
share midnights bliss
let my word
speak my devotion
let my dream
find mornings light


  • Goldfinch60

    Beautiful words enhanced by my favourite trumpeter singing - what more could I want this morning.


  • orchidee

    I never knew breath did so much - well, I know now!

  • Fay Slimm.

    Breath-taking romance in such poetic and beautiful wording - your chosen lady would surely treasure this one my friend.

  • Accidental Poet

    Amazingly beautiful.

  • AwHec8

    Damn Dude pretty good. Love it when there is the extra music or song to go with.

  • The Uneducated O.A.P

    Breathtaking words dusky,

  • GON


  • Suresh

    Your words took her breath away,

  • Neville

    this has a really nice dreamy romantic feel and loads of poetic charm n appeal...

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