Birthday Drive.

Goldfinch60



It was her birthday, 

She wanted a surprise.

So surprise her I did!

Drove her to the coast,

Walked along the beach, 

The beach at Broadstairs!

We had a cup of coffee,

Sitting by the shore.

Then she wanted an ice cream, 

So I bought her one, 

When I drove her, 

Drove her to Dover! 

 

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 23rd, 2020 00:42
  • Comment from author about the poem: It was a friends birthday yesterday and I took her for a drive.
  • Category: Humor
  • Views: 14
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet
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  • orchidee

    Good write Gold. It won't let me post any poems at present, on an old slow laptop I am using temporarily. I can only do comments.
    See you all again soon I hope!

    • Goldfinch60

      Thanks Orchi, shame about the laptop. I used to work in computing before I retired and we knew from experience that there were only two types of computer, the prototype and the obsolete!

      Andy

      • orchidee

        Cooeee Gold! I could be back again soon. An old laptop I have is almost obsolete in the version it is. It needs a gee-up somehow - very slow, some sites not loading at all.

      • ANGELA & BRIAN

        BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks for the Music nothing quite like a Shostokovitch Walz to lift the Spirits during lockdown ~ thanks for shariing !
        WOW some drive & ice cream and coffee thrown in. Kent is a beautiful County in Spring / Summer ~ especially on a Sunny day ! Did yiu see any signs of *Lockdown Loosening* ? Where did you start from ? The distance from Broadstairs to Dover is about 25 miles (by road) so you gave your motor a *good run* which is important ! Angela takes ours to Work each day and we clock up a few more miles @ the weekend. Sounds like a lovely day out ~ AMEN. Please check *Patio Pond Paradise* ~ Thanks !

        Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
        Love Brian & Angela 💛💛💛

        • Goldfinch60

          I drove from Evesham to Gillingham in Kent on Friday and stayed with my friend for the weekend. It was my friends birthday on Monday and I know she likes the coast hence Gillingham to Broadstairs, Broadstairs to Dover then Dover to Gillingham, a good drive. Came back home yesterday, a good drive that only took 2 hours 40 minutes, normally it is about three hours. Did nearly 500 miles over the weekend.

        • Suresh

          ...and it's said, "opposites can't be friends",....

        • Accidental Poet

          I believe you've passed the test for true friendship. But yesterday you passed it again. ; )

          • Goldfinch60

            That you AP, she has been a friend for nearly 40 years, with both me and my wife, (my wife has now passed). It is a good FRIENDship.

            Andy

            • Accidental Poet

              My condolences on the passing of your wife Andy. You will be together again. ; )



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