Be To Me.
Be to me eternity's song
and not as lust's transient notes.
Be as the forever of strong
affection and not just for moments.
Be like faith without limit
and not as doubt's breakable bond.
Be to me true as infinity
for heaven applauds trustful resolve.
Be alive to ageless passion
and not just in first blush of youth.
Be to me need ever lasting
for such keeps alight love's real beauty.
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Fay Slimm. (
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who could possibly want for anything more... these words are perfectly placed on the page where they clearly belong...
Thank you a load for your lovely comment on my today's effort dear Nev.....You are kindness itself wrapped in a poet's ready disguise my friend.
Love is but a beautiful rose of the heart. Great write Fay.
Love is all that and more my warm-hearted friend. So pleased you enjoyed the read.
Good write Fay, though Fido don't let me have much passion! heehee.
Good to know you liked the read Orchi .
My Dear Fay,
Upon reading “Be To Me” and Andy’s “Beauty Within”, I found a recurring thread between the two that is very meaningful to me. Thank you for sharing your poetic pen.
Laura🌻
N.B. - Please read the comment I made to Andy’s “Beauty Within”.
Am delighted the read of both poems helped you today dear Laura - sometimes we can get a meaningful message from poetic writing and have noticed the theme in Andy's posting too - - your comment is gratefully received my friend.
Good Evening Fay - Angela here ! Thnak you for your elegant Love Poem !
V 1. Is a plea that *Love is for Life* not just CHRISTMAS
V 2. Search for qualities of LOVE - that are Infinite & Limitless
V 3. Not just Loves *Blush of Youth* but *Ageless Passion*
That is exactly what I was looking for (PERMANANCE) in
my relationship with BRIAN and I have found it ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
Everlasting indeed, and always recallable.
That love is so special as shown in your words Fay.
Andy
Only from the mind of a woman could such beauty come. Nice Love song/poem. Taking the long haul approach of Love, instead of moments of fiery passion us men tend to bring? Concentrating on the visual we do, instead of the beauty within of the person, type thing.
Such wishes expressed in words on screen or paper are desires of the heart which i fear come from a heart who has been cheated by their temporary nearness. Whilst the years ripen us they do not change such desire but we learn that perfection, though temporary, once tasted, is needy of more.
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