Flush
See how she tries to hide discreetly
Behind those rain scented net curtains of hers
Strawberry pink thimbles now blushing
A full punnet discarded and bruised
Her tapestries yellowed and now long since faded
Wrapped up in yesterday’s news
Ah but her lover said
Babe I still love you and never forget that
With you, life is for living and still fun
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Neville (
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Beauty glows! From behind a tissue of year beaten experiences a rejoicing of life is written upon the shape one has taken and radiates from within.
The look in the eye as a hand gently squeezes yours..... holds the essence of 'why'.
Great writing Neville.
Thanking you so much for seeing just that little bit beyond the obvious... so much and always appreciated, I often struggle to find adequate words..
Neville
Another intriguing array of imagery in this tale half yet expertly told Nev. - wrapping live memories in yesterday's news means when read over again that love will never fade even when age-yellowed - - -- - -- a most appealing write ..........x
Bless you and truly dear Fay... this one kind of wrote itself my friend.. Wishing you a super sunny Sunday down there on the very edge of West.... x
Erm, I struggles a bit with the hidden meanings of some poems. But they are adequate words - and I mean more than 'Oh, that'll do, any old words!'
Fido of course says it's ONLY about some gal eating a load of strawberries. I will put him in the back garden a while, and have some 'excitement' myself.
Tell Fido to shut up if you wish - but he never does! lol.
Ah' but that's half the fun innit.... chomping on strawberries I mean.. Nah' me n Fido are sweet
Cheers Orchidee 🙂
Ah my love the eternal witness that it all happened otherwise it may as well have been a dream
Excellent Neville this could be a chapter in my book too
Well captured
How utterly novel of ya Andrew and welcome and much appreciated too
Cheers Mate, have a great Sunday and then some :}
That love will always show beauty within her and within you Neville.
Andy
You are a cool cat GF60 sir.. if curiosity killed the cat, then positivity most probably would resuscitate it.. One way or another, you are gonna go on for ever my friend.. cheers
Neville
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