dusk arising

a different way


and now our time
has run,  
something lost,
no forgives,
or forgets,
no hatred
and yet.
what we do here,
we used to be,    
in a different way,
doesn't work today.


  • Neville

    there is always more than one way of skinning a cat.. unless you happen to be vegan.... Nice one DA :)

  • Suresh

    parting is such sweet sorrow

    has never been so painlessly and poetically expressed

  • Fay Slimm.

    Your pen so aptly describes the depth of sorrow when time defeats our efforts to mend something in love that is "lost and undone"

  • Accidental Poet

    What might have once worked, must now lay in restful sleep where memories inspire forever smiles.
    Great write da.

  • Goldfinch60

    Those memories of when all was well are still there and always will be.


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