and listening now
the sadness in that music
amplified the lack of spirit
in his recent will
there were things
needing to be done but
tomorrow
was so convenient
the grass grew
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in my opinion, the word love is banded around far too often these days but.. if I were to write I luv your words.. your authors note and the music clip.. in essence, this whole page.. I would not be fibbing...
To be honest, I found the whole experience incredibly moving on the back of reading Laura's lovely gesture in remembering our dear departed friend Kevin Browne's birthday...
Neville
One word only for this poetic gem combined with the moving music -
- - excellent.
A fine write and music dusk.
If tomorrow was assured, it would be more convenient.
I have so enjoyed this movie, many times, and it's haunting music.
In the end the most important emotion displayed was COMPASSION.
Your words here though, mesmerizing
May that grass grow forever in our lives as we sit silently listening to the music in our hearts.
Andy
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