Unmistakable.
I remain here perusing a stranger
in this most really unsuitable space
and whisper what seems inescapable,
converging on"maybes" but changing
to thought that is stripping me naked
and yearning yet still ought to hesitate,
when as "yes" rears itself into view may
the loom of long-woven compliance fray
while a new "you and me" I contemplate.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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Comments6
May that compliance with life always be with you Fay.
Andy
You are so kind and thank you Andy.
Only you could craft such an exquisite way of describing what we all know happens in those delicious moments of uncertainty or hesitation ...
Neville
I knew you would see the beginning of something big happening....... and it did !! ................ mucho thankyu my dear sir for the visit and read.
Good write Fay.
Thank you Orchi
I think you voice a fear within the longing. So much easier to turn away from the thought than contemplate its complexity and danger. Yet the goal .... oh the goal.... need i say more?
You hit the nail on its head D.A. - and as for the goal no need to say more - --
thank you for your thoughtful input to Unmissable
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening FAY - You are vin a sensusl mood today - what did you have for Breakfast ? ! The first time I met Brian - and we danced together - it was LOVE - unmistakeable & irresistable and still is - AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Angela & Brian & Smokey !
Please check our NEW FUSUION
*BEYOND THE SUNSET* about Heaven - Thanks !
Ha - - so pleased you found value in my few words today dear Duo.
A self portrait for sure, both in image and words.
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