dusk arising

it will come



 

they told me love is truly beautiful
and it will come your way
well i'd been sitting round thinking bout love
seems many a too long day


they told me love is truly beautiful
and it will come your way
though everyone o them's an old broken heart
with far too many words to say

Comments6

  • Neville


    wot we got here is the perfect marriage of sound n vision... long time no hear...

    • dusk arising

      oh bring back soul music of the 60's before they called it northern soul.

    • orchidee

      Good write dusk.

      • dusk arising

        Get down and boogie Orchi.

      • Fay Slimm.

        Danci' and wrigglin' at my desk as I read your ballad to love - Wow - oh yeh - I sure do remember movin and shakin to such great numbers my friend.....and agreed while doing that we need not think of love that's gone wrong........

        • dusk arising

          This was just a silly love song which came into my mind.... I could have laboured and given it more verses/depth but..ho... great old soul music... glad u wriggled.

        • Accidental Poet

          Well da, I've never been known as a dancing man. I was always the guy standing in front of the band watching them play. But I can relate to your write here. But when you least expect it, the love you were told would come your way will be staring you in the face with a smile. AP.

          • dusk arising

            Was just a silly love song ade up on te spot. I was in those soul bands...singing in one aged 18 and later playing saxes in them.

          • Goldfinch60

            Love is beautiful and it did come my way, the love is still there for my wonderful lady who is now waiting for me.

            Andy

            • dusk arising

              You are one of those lucky persons for whom it worked out. This is just another silly love song.

            • alexis karpouzos

              The repetition '' they told me love'' is very interesting. Love is always here and death, too!



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