Imagine life without the stars
A jail with windows free of bars
The busy roads deprived of cars
And know how much I miss you
Imagine snow without the flakes
An alleyway without the jakes
A detox free of any shakes
And know how much I miss you
Imagine there's no crescent moon
Or birds or flowers alive in June
The sun not in the sky by noon
And know how much I miss you
Imagine fire without the smoke
A crisp score note without the coke
A punchline searching for it's joke
And know how much I miss you
Imagine life without the pain
Where peace falls on your weary brain
The dreams you have come true again
And know that i am with you
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Author:
peto (
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Comments6
WOW, I love this one. You really knocked it out of the park here peto. ; ) AP
Thank you AP
Truly appreciated
Filled with great comparisons this romantic verse puts the pain of love on central stage when waiting an end to missing. An engaging read peto
Much obliged Fay
Thank you
What a wonderful write.
Andy
Thank you Andy
oh yes, what a wonderful world that would be..........
Indeed
Cheers Neville
Wow wow wow what a charming imaginative romantic poem and I was admiring all the awesome imagery and muse you depicted to express the love and longing so poetically. One of your best!! Kudos.!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too. Thanks
Thank you
Really appreciate the visit and comment
Good to see you
You never cease to amaze!!
Nor do you Christina nor do you
Thank you very much
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