peto

Imagine

Imagine life without the stars 

A jail with windows free of bars 

The busy roads deprived of cars 

And know how much I miss you 

 

Imagine snow without the flakes 

An alleyway without the jakes 

A detox free of any shakes 

And know how much I miss you 

 

Imagine there's no crescent moon 

Or birds or flowers alive in June 

The sun not in the sky by noon 

And know how much I miss you 

 

Imagine fire without the smoke 

A crisp score note without the coke

A punchline searching for it's joke 

And know how much I miss you 

 

Imagine life without the pain 

Where peace falls on your weary brain 

The dreams you have come true again 

And know that i am with you 

Comments6

  • Accidental Poet

    WOW, I love this one. You really knocked it out of the park here peto. ; ) AP

    • peto

      Thank you AP
      Truly appreciated

    • Fay Slimm.

      Filled with great comparisons this romantic verse puts the pain of love on central stage when waiting an end to missing. An engaging read peto

      • peto

        Much obliged Fay
        Thank you

      • Goldfinch60

        What a wonderful write.

        Andy

        • peto

          Thank you Andy

        • Neville


          oh yes, what a wonderful world that would be..........

          • peto

            Indeed
            Cheers Neville

          • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸

            Wow wow wow what a charming imaginative romantic poem and I was admiring all the awesome imagery and muse you depicted to express the love and longing so poetically. One of your best!! Kudos.!

            Plz do read and comment my newest poem too. Thanks

            • peto

              Thank you
              Really appreciate the visit and comment
              Good to see you

            • Maxine Smith

              Such a warm, loving poem.

              A poem that melts my heart.

              Truly happy your back.

              You inspire me to write again.

              • peto

                Such a lovely thing to say
                Cant wait to see the result
                Thank you



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