Mid Summer Meadow
You ma’am
Were one of those near misses
Now history
Long since consigned to memory
But a perfect picture
Captured
Dancing slow
Mid-summer meadow slow and
Perfect
The sound of children laughing
Seed heads bursting all around you
Tall grasses
If only you had not been quite so ..
Well you know
We could be there now, just saying.
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Author:
Neville (
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Should I meet her too?! lol.
Maybe.... but in the meantime, thanks a bundle Orchidee 🤪👍🦝🤡
Picture-perfect this rendering of such a near miss Nev which many of us can surely relate to - another scene of romantic memory that serves as a taste of "what might have been." A poignant write..........x
reading you is a delight... thanking you is like a reflex Fay... virtually impossible to stop or delay when triggered...
Snap - same too at this end -- but thanking you gladly for all your valued thank yous my friend................x
The moment you called her ma'am
I feared the worst
Nicely done as always
Bless you peto... much appreciated ..
Neville
Absolutely delightful. I write with a broad grin upon my face and a chuckle in my throat.
Such joy of memories and the games we play upon them.
A great tribute to love and attraction.
Cheers DA.. I shall drink to love and attraction this very eve and one for you too sir...
This is why we have second chances Neville. Awesome write my friend. ; ) AP
Way to go.. way too kind... many huge thanks and true 😉 Neville
...way too kind? I think not. Quite deserving I think. ; ) AP
2 more comments
We all had near misses - some of them we may still miss.
Andy
not all of them miss takes .. but ya got to learn from em regardless, dont'cha eh' .. thanking you GF60 and true sir
Neville
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