You're A Homewrecker
You ask him was he tempted
You wanted him just because
Was he tempted, of course he was
Was he tempted, of course he fuckin' was
He had no fuckin' idea that you were a...
Homewrecker, a fuckin' homewrecker
A God damn homewrecker
You ask him was he tempted
Almost had him in your claws
Was he tempted, of course he was
Was he tempted, of course he fuckin' was
He had no fuckin' idea that you were a...
Homewrecker, you just don't care
Homewrecker, just another affair
Homewrecker, you've no regret
Just another victim for your bed
Homewrecker, you don't understand
Homewrecker, just a one night stand
Homewrecker, you've no respect
Just another victim in your bed
You ask me was I tempted
You never wanted romance
Was I tempted, not a chance
Was I tempted, not a fuckin' chance
Because I knew you were a fuckin'...
Homewrecker, a fuckin' homewrecker
A God damn homewrecker
You ask me was I tempted
Almost had me in a trance
Was I tempted, not a chance
Was I tempted, not a fuckin' chance
Because I knew you were a fuckin'...
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Comments8
A fu.......erm, jolly good write there!
Jolly isn't the word in my head when I wrote this one but thanks.
Brilliantly innovative and unashamedly bold - in its depiction of untamed:
boiled-kettle implosion,
of self-awareness!
May I suggest, (if you are not already aware of it) you look-up:
'If I told him, a Completed Portrait of Picasso' by Gertrude Stein
A work of similarly mind boggling journey, of word athletics
thanks for your comment and I will certainly seek that book.
Have a great weekend
I break a million hearts just for fun
only a million, part-timer!
A man - eater. Got hurt as a teenager by a man and swore to take revenge on the whole fekin gender.
Plenty of them about.... "heaven help them, when they fall"
revenge is the only answer.
almost like a song
It became a song style as I had different lines with different perspectives but I can't sing so it's just a poem with a song structure i guess.
Very powerful emotive write.
thank you Goldfinch60.
Can't beat real for me
Great write
cheers mate
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