Crushed by your hate.
Can't see beyond your harsh words, you've tainted and taunted me
I'm trapped by accusations, leaving me doubtful, full of reservations.
You stand high on your pillar of power, crushing me under feet of disdain
You watch me curl into a ball of tears, preaching God's will, filling me with fear.
A predator hiding behind religious dogma, tearing me apart with abuse and put downs
I must flee your hatred and evil God, kick me, punish me like an unwanted dog.
For now you've won and I will pack up my bag, sorry my apology fell on deaf ears
Gaslighter, donkey, jackass and probably more, you've won, I leave, one nil the score.
I was a girl learning to be brave, but put in my place, reduced to nothing
I don't hate you as my heart won't allow, disgarded and bullied, return, I never shall.
- Author: DianeKey6 ( Offline)
- Published: July 19th, 2020 11:01
- Category: Sad
- Views: 61
Comments5
So sad to read this. I have witnessed some of the shameful bullying inflicted on you by a man who dares to call himself a christian.
I saw your apology where you were willing to sacrifice your pride to pour oil on troubled waters but with increased vehemence your attacker continued.
Honestly I hope you will come to see that individual for the aggressive troll type personality they are.
Most MPS contributors are gentle free thinking creative people, many of us treating poetry as a self healing therapy. We enjoy complimentary comments to and from each other which lifts us in confidence to post more.
Sadly there are one or two who try to pervert our thoughts with preaching their questionable directives and exhibit the desire to be nasty to all who question in the slightest any one sentence of their work.
You will find warmth and support on MPS from all but a tiny minority.
Please stay.
Thank you
lol i wonder who this is about
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I agree with what d a and Unsub have said, do not let the words of such an ignorant bully send you from this site, it is great to read your poetry, just put that person in a box and send him away. We are here for you.
Keep writing and showing us your wonderful words Diane.
Andy
Thank you
Isn't it wonderful, some pay hundreds of dollars an hour to sit across a stranger and blurt out their feelings, to be asked 'what do you think, it means?' (therapist sessions)
While we lucky few, drum the cadence of our untamed emotions into our keyboard and create works of rhythmic self-awareness.
Sadly, our world is full of those that promote discord and attempt to afflict others with the asinine hate they live with.
The simple fact that you have the ability to transfer your rage and disappointment into fuelling works of creative self-expression, is an asset you must cherish and rejoice-in!
well done my friend, keep that mighty pen busy
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well constructed piece showing the evil that resides underneath the Christian poet. Sorry you have suffered at the hands of a two-faced monster. Don't leave us you are more popular than he already.
Thank you
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