I see you falling down into that hole, I can't stop what you think but I can encourage you to see higher than you believe.
Apart from making sure you are not hungry, cold or unloved. My job is to be there to just pick you up, mistakes are our own to earn..
Life is not just in front of a screen, with people you may never see. That is for the in between, like a bit of glue we each use.
This is all a dream but don't let yours get stuck in this Web of others creations, many rivers run to the oceans of madness.
Within you is the whole universe ready to explore, like a black hole ready to absorb.
Pure light of laughter or the darkest of frowns, life means we have already been given a crown!
What we choose to do
A gift we hand down
Hoping to hold one more time
Before the curtains are drawn
The next journey none really know of
I know from my lifes lessons
You really should enjoy this one
By saying what you feel
Before you no longer can
Stand in the grass or grains of sand
I hope you'll find what each soul left
A reason to breathe & get out of bed
Float down the river of life in awe of it
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Letting go of the struggle I have to stop my son feeding his gaming addiction and a few other emotions... We all have a journey to find our balance, addiction means doing an act repeatedly even when you are aware of the negative affects! Much peace and respect
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you have hit the nail firmly on its head.
Thank you so much, its a difficult me to play! But we all enjoy!
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
Probably the most profound piece you have ever published on mps here Dan.
When you lift your head above your own concerns about how you relate to society and show your concern for others, especially those close to you.... it's these times we all can see the soul of you and there is much wisdom in there.
You are a very humble saint in my estimation.
..... Yet I sit here in desperate headache that I can't cope with being me right now. Your words bring new tears I need to absorb and find that root that you can often trigger!
Always appreciate your time and vibration my friend!
From these words Dan it shows how far you have come on your journey into that better you.
You have found that way forwards and I am sure that you will now be able to find that way forward for your son into a place of peace wonder and love - that love that you have for him.
Wonderful poem Dan.
Andy
Always appreciated my friend
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