If Only
If only my wordlets could capture
each droplet of rapture
as alchemy bottled in moments
of changling awe
soaks any invasive festering
of unaware mentals
silence would drip with explosion.
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Shards of music could then open
on crystal air and proud
bird would dose joy into cloudy
dawn invoking my ink
to join in the chorus of singing.
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Fay Slimm. (
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Oh but your words do all this upon entering my head. I asssure you birds sing a new harmony as your thoughts morph from words to complete mental pictures bringing forth an explosion of electrons in my brain.
No headaches were involved in the writing of this comment.
You honour and spoil me and I am so grateful as it spurs on my efforts at all sorts of poetry - - glad your head was free after all that mental explosion D.A.
a melodic orchestra of choice 'wordlets', immersing us with the sensation of a nightingale's ballad at dawn
wonderful tempo
What an encouraging comment and thanking you muchly for the visit and read my friend.
the song you have placed here should not only be sung from high boughs, but all those places where ears are hungry for the sound of birdsong and poetry ... Neville x
A song for hungry ears eh -- How blinkin' kind of you to say so mi amigo.............x
Good write Fay.
Thanking you kindly for dropping by Orchi.
And thus you did. The music of Nature is compelling and poets thrive on its beauty. Your well placed words sing a song to the bird lovers of the world. Great poem - Phil A.
Yes the music of nature casts its wonderful spell with the many bird-songs world-wide as you say Phil - - I always appreciate your visit and comments.
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening Fay ~ Thanks for posting an enigmatic Poem ! Life ~ Love & Nature are awesome and each day we experience new Highs (& Lows & Inbetweens) ! Capturing them in emotive wordlets is equally the Poets ~ Pain & Pleasure !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
We have not posted today ~ Please check Yesterdays
*NOT GOING OUT* which is also a FUSION ~ Thnaks !
Glad you feel the same about nature and giving its wild-life time and attention will ever bring blessings methinks dear Brian. Hugs to you both and of course young Smoky..
Wonderful words Fay, the glory of Nature's Symphony brings glory to us all.
Andy
Many thanks Andy for dropping by and leaving such an encouraging comment.
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