Sidewalk Cracks II

SheWasTheSun

The sidewalk burned my feet
As I watched you leave
On the coldest August day
The two of us had ever seen

I stared at the cracks
And the weeds growing through
And I prayed that our love
Might push through the pavement too

  • Author: SheWasTheSun (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 3rd, 2020 21:09
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  • MendedFences27

    I just finished Part 1 and now I'm crushed. I hope this is fiction and you guys are still good.
    Apart from that it's a nice little poem with a strong hopeful outlook. Chin Up. - Phil A.

    • SheWasTheSun

      Thank you Phil! I actually wrote this one first about a moment of heartbreak- then wrote part 1 as a reminder that we have been through worse and risen again. Just happened to post them in a different order. I think they are actually interchangeable, depending on how the story ends.

    • Goldfinch60

      Your love will push through, love is so powerful.

      Andy

      • SheWasTheSun

        Thank you Andy, that means so much.



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