Something in the Air

Neville

Something in the Air

 

Somewhere beyond these

harbour walls

Behind all those redundant

Masts

and summer tourist clutter

The sound of

once returning fishing boats

now moored

do still idle, cough and splutter

Yet,

in candled windows shuttered

and

in shadowed doorways yonder

All the widows huddle, knitting

tablecloths and folding curtains

Now

they just embroider face masks

and hand crochet, these oh’ so

very silly 

pointless doilies

while the old men sit in semi-circles

around their

half empty wooden tables

Playing cards and telling stories

There must be something,

surely in the air, they chorused …

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 7th, 2020 02:28
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • orchidee

    Good write Neville.

    • Neville


      thanks Orchidee..

      Neville

    • L. B. Mek

      the only other poem I recall using the word doilies (or doily to be precise), is a poem by Elizabeth Bishop titled 'Filling Station':
      https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-2931
      that your writing continuously reminds me of some of my favourite poems and Poet's, is a testament to the relatable quality and insight you write with

      • Neville


        Cor blimey guv'nor, I am so much more than merely mightily honoured ... thank you so very bloomin much indeed my dear friend and poet..

        Neville

      • Fay Slimm.

        You pen a sad picture of today's strange state my literary friend. Another piece to ponder on what has overtaken our once fearless race.

        • Neville


          chin up tho and shoulders back eh me lovely.... ta and muchly

          Neville

          • Fay Slimm.

            Yup - am adoin' that most dutifully my wise-minded cap'n..................x

          • MendedFences27

            Nicely spoken Nev. No matter where you go these days, you see the effects. As for doilies, they serve no useful purpose. They're terrible as a coaster, awful as a place mat, and totally dangerous as a pot holder. Well, truly enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.

            • Neville


              thanking you most kindly my friend ... and might I suggest if anyone has any doilies going spare, they should unravel it/them and make a nice ball of cotton, string, wool or twine ...

              Neville 🙂

            • orchidee

              You got another gal I should possibly meet?! heehee.

              • Neville


                what's mine is yours..

              • Goldfinch60

                Very good words Neville, and such a good descrotion of some lives in these Strange Times.

                Andy

                • Neville


                  thank you kindly kind sir.. they are indeed most peculiar aren't they ... lets hope a vaccine can be found soon and made available to all..

                  Neville



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