I Spied.
I bought a star-line to fish in Love's pool
and caught an obsession or two.
I spied a face in the lake called Romance.
and reflected on what next to do.
I stole a moonbeam from Destiny's sky
and shone it on someone I knew.
I took a long look in my Fantasy book
and one there was coming in view.
I picked time from the tree of Forever
and dreamt of being with you
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: August 9th, 2020 02:46
- Comment from author about the poem: A little Sunday-scribble posted in short-line attempt at rhyming fantasy's romantic dreams ...... hope you enjoy.
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Comments4
how absolutely bloomin lovely is that eh'...... bloomin muchly I say and then some .....
........... Neville
Shyly smiling a thank you kind sir........ glad you enjoyed the little write..... .x
Beautiful. No other words required.
Andy
What a generous word you chose to describe the piece dear Andy -- thanking you very kindly.
A very delightful scribble, Fay. Some great imagery. Lines of poetic beauty. " I picked time from the tree of forever" . Just wonderful. - Phil A
So good to know you liked the small piece and its bit of imagery Phil - -- and thank you for dropping by.
Amazing love poem. I wish i had written this.... definitely into my favs.
Absolutely delightful reading.
Wow - - so pleased you enjoyed it my friend............. thanking you muchly
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