Fay Slimm.

I Spied.



I Spied.

I bought a star-line to fish in Love's pool
and caught an obsession or two.

I spied a face in the lake called Romance.
and reflected on what next to do.

I stole a moonbeam from Destiny's sky
and shone it on someone I knew.

I took a long look in my Fantasy book
and one there was coming in view.

I picked time from the tree of Forever
and dreamt of being with you


  • Neville

    how absolutely bloomin lovely is that eh'...... bloomin muchly I say and then some .....

    ........... Neville

    • Fay Slimm.

      Shyly smiling a thank you kind sir........ glad you enjoyed the little write..... .x

    • Goldfinch60

      Beautiful. No other words required.


      • Fay Slimm.

        What a generous word you chose to describe the piece dear Andy -- thanking you very kindly.

      • MendedFences27

        A very delightful scribble, Fay. Some great imagery. Lines of poetic beauty. " I picked time from the tree of forever" . Just wonderful. - Phil A

        • Fay Slimm.

          So good to know you liked the small piece and its bit of imagery Phil - -- and thank you for dropping by.

        • dusk arising

          Amazing love poem. I wish i had written this.... definitely into my favs.

          Absolutely delightful reading.

          • Fay Slimm.

            Wow - - so pleased you enjoyed it my friend............. thanking you muchly

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