Beaten

Neville

Beaten

 

As clueless

As his fingers were

..

And more

Calloused than his thumb

..

She proved herself

to be indeed,

..

as cheap as a

penny whistle was

..

Yet she beat him

Like a drum ..

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 13th, 2020 01:11
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Comments4

  • orchidee

    Good write Neville. Yep, I met her - she checked out my, erm, thumb, among other things too swoony to tell! Woof! Fido won't let me tell. lol.

    • Neville


      My word.. go tell Fido to wash his mouth out ... and you.. yes you Steven, I have absolutely no idea what you are on today Orchidee sir .. this is about my old guitar and mandolin teacher .. but thanks anyway 🙂

      • orchidee

        Oops, it's me that should stop! Fido barks to warn me, as my 'watchdog'
        But I needed some fun, being married to KP, you see. Not that I ever see here 95% of the time. When I do, it's like an old trout, with her Botox, or she's been on telly or in the papers AGAIN!

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      • Fay Slimm.

        This maybe a game of who wins at shove-halfpenny but I have known relationships like the one here so aptly outlined - -- ah - just noticed a comment and discovered the subject of your engaging post - good on 'er your ol' music teacher - - I had one whose ouchy love-taps I will never forget..........x

        • Neville


          dont tell Orchidee, but I am self taught... ta n muchly my dear Lady x

          • Fay Slimm.

            Wow - you have a gift then dear friend - - my brother was self taught and could play the piano far better than me who had a very strict teacher.......... x

          • Goldfinch60

            May that drumming be in time to the penny whistle Neville.

            Andy

            • Neville



              you can beat an egg, but ya can't beat a penny whistle, can ya ... and if ya can't beat it, ya better off blowin it.............. Cheers Andy

              Neville

            • MendedFences27

              Once there was a woman, cheap as a penny whistle, men played her like a guitar.
              No calloused fingers or thumbs here. Pretty much tone deaf, always have been. Yet, my children all play instruments, sax, clarinet. oboe. Did you finally master the art? Seems that a musical ear and poets don't mix.Did any ever play? Like the way you presented this one, like strings on a guitar. - Phil A.

              • Neville


                thanks Phil .. I play guitar, electric bass & mandolin... all very badly I might add .. it seems several visitors have picked up on my response to Orchidee ..

                in truth, this particular scribble has nowt to do with musical instruction or teaching whatsoever 🙂



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