Maybe Old but Not Daft

Neville

Maybe Old but Not Daft

 

He knew what

Her game was

He had seen it all before

 

The scanty two piece

The selfie, the pursing of lips

And the pouting

 

But under the circumstances

For him, trying to look interested

Was far easier said than done

 

After all, he was

An old man of the sea

And rarely spoke of nothing but

 

Harbours, of tides

Of jetties, the moon

And of marina’s and quays

 

But show him

A measure of sailcloth,

A rope makers awl, or an anchor

 

Then he be nobody’s fool, but a

Bloomin good fisher, a sailor, a husband

a father and friend through n through ..

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 14th, 2020 01:28
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments6

  • orchidee

    Good write Neville.
    Aww, why they say to me 'Why don't you write a poem about yourself: 'Daft but not old'? They are horrible to me! lol.

    • Neville



      .............................................. you daft old so and so you 🙂

      • orchidee

        Daft AND old?! I wish I would stop talking rubbish sometimes! lol. Or shall I continue.....

      • Fay Slimm.

        Dame-games never sit well with disinterested sailors whose love of the sea cannot be shifted by pouting of lips on scanty-clad lasses - -- this read captures old sea-dogs to an absolute tee Nev.

        • Neville


          Hiya,

          I guess we have seen many of em in our time eh' living by the coast and what not .. thank you for such a delightful and encouraging review my dear lady Fay ....... Me, well I'm just an old airman x

        • L. B. Mek

          this stirred up long forgotten flavours of Hemingway's: 'the old man and the sea'
          need I say more... lol

          • Neville


            .................... Hey, how cool is that .. many sincere thanks L.B 🙂

            ............... Neville

          • MendedFences27

            The ocean draws many people to her.
            My wife and I have both spent our entire lives close to it. Now that we are older we are more inland. My Lord it's at lest a ten minute drive. LOL We must go there often to restore our sanity. It's in the blood of those so afflicted.
            This is a great tribute to one such person, who, so it seems, is a true sailor. Born of the sea and still in love with it. A great nurturer just like it. - Phil A.

            • Neville


              Thanks so much Phil for visiting these words of mine and for sharing something of your own love for the sea.. We live close to the ocean too and visit often .. you are right about it being in the blood .. and salt by the way is my only real vice these days 🙂

              Neville

            • FineB

              Great write ✍ Neville.

              Well, life begins at 40. The best is yet to come in our lives after that.

              Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
              FineB

              • Neville


                Some of us would give our eye teeth to be 40 .. but know what ya mean FineB... Many thanks and stay safe yourself now ya hear 🙂

              • Goldfinch60

                The sea has the power to call us all, so much life to be remembered by the sea.

                Andy

                • Neville


                  ......... That's precisely one of the many ways I see it Andy ... thanks my friend n truly true too ...

                  ..........Neville



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