body part

dusk arising

 

We all have our favourite
parts of our bodies
i know where mine is
because its given me
so much pleasure
ever since the first time
it felt stimulation.

But one has to be careful.
I mean, there are parts
of your body which, if abused,
time will punish you for.
My favourite part
has had much abuse
after wild nights drinking
leaving it sore, burning
and sometimes blistered.

And through my life
my tastes have changed.
Where once it was the
straightforward pleasures
which brought satisfaction
now i find i'm open for
something excitingly fresh
and dip into the exotic.

I have to admit though
when fully aroused
my favourite bit
has been known to be
abusive, the punisher
but fortuneately also
the conveyor of pleasure.

Yes all in all, there's
little to compare with the
pleasureable experiences
received by me
all in good taste
upon my tongue
my favourite body part.

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 17th, 2020 06:10
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  • orchidee

    As I say, I of course knew it was this part all along! lol 🙂

    • dusk arising

      I would have imagined your organ playing digits were your favoured parts and of course your remaining good eye after the battle of hastings.

    • Fay Slimm.

      Ha -- the secret now outed as to what was the body part is you favour my friend.......... a good play on words which had me guessing wrongly until the end.

      • dusk arising

        Really? ... I can't begin to think where any confusion could have led you to picture another body part.

        • Fay Slimm.

          Ha ha - -you rascal you .................... !!!

        • Neville


          although it has not always been my fave bit of me .. I do now share your preferred organ ..

          and for all those reasons you so deftly and cunningly left as a trail to make the reader think you were gonna say summat else entirely...

          A clever fun post indeed DA and so say all of us .....

          • dusk arising

            As the late Mr Kenny Everett would have said ..."and it's all in the best possible taste" quickly crossing his legs whilst flashing his knickers.

          • Goldfinch60

            Clever words d a, misleading until the end.

            Andy

          • Seek

            My dirty old mind was being (mis)led elsewhere. Glad I finally settled on the right organ. Very imaginative stuff!

          • L. B. Mek

            like the twist,
            must have been fun to write, it definitely was to read lol

          • smileeshellyy

            hahaha love this! definitely clever



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