Rapture.
High
was the colour of passion tonight.
Wild
was the rapture and spicy the fire.
Honeyed
the lips that sought efflorescence.
Hot
was flesh lust's abandon caressed.
Ecstasy's
rainbow when seen in sweet love
means
Heaven accepts - and it approves.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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I had a feeling I woz gonna love this just as soon as I saw you had posted ...
p.s. I was not disappointed
... Neville
P.P.S. -- -- glad you weren't - - - - disappointed................x
I had a feeling I was gonna swoon... lol. Good write Fay.
Thanks Orchi.
ANGELA HERE - Good Afternoon FAY ! WOW - RAPTURE - A very emotive & spiritual word ! However since being married to BRIAN (in March) I have experienced (@ 32 !) for the first time - just what *Sensual Rapture* can be ! Just holding & kissing BRIAN sends me into RAPTURES ! You will understand - that because we are devout Christians (and Brian a Deacon !) we held back in our Physical Relationship - BUT - now all barriers are down we have entered the *Exploritory Realm of uninhibited sensual LOVE* and YES - *RAPTURE* is the appropriate WORD ! Plus all the colours of Loves Ecstasy !
HEAVEN accepts & its approves - AMEN !
Love & Joy & Peace
Angela & Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
Thank you indeed for your visit and comment on Rapture dear Angela - like you I have always had such a respect for that spiritual word. Hugs to you both and strokes to Smokey.
Yes indeed, love is heavenly.
And I sat thinking about love after reading you here. Recapturing in my mind some of those feelings when love is brand new and nothing finer flows through one's soul.
Look what you did, thank you.
My pleasure indeed that my few lines on Rapture took you back to ecstatic times D.A. - - - those were the days eh?
That love has certainly has had me in raptures and your words send me the same way Fay.
Andy
Good to know that dear Andy and as long as we keep memories of love alive in our hearts we will feel the same rapture over again......... thank you so much for your honest comment my friend.
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