Andrew Charles Forrest

Observations #53

Observations #53

 

Time, is my greatest enemy

My very best friend

On my hands in the beginning

Slipped, through my fingers in the end

Comments5

  • Goldfinch60

    Time seems to speed up as we get older Andrew.

    Andy

  • orchidee

    Good write Andrew. You enjoying yourself then? It's said 'Time goes quickly when we're enjoying ourselves!'

  • dusk arising

    Truly great piece today from you. Heartfelt by us older poets.

    This is truly a gem and i cannot think of ever reading a better piece on MPS so my friend, this is a MUST for my favourites and i shall print a copy to hang on my wall somewhere.

  • Neville


    this is so true and applies to each of us .... brevity at its bloomin best mate ...

  • The Uneducated O.A.P

    Working my way through past poems when time allows, and this ones up there with the best



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