Sun Shy
She was sun shy
She was parasolled
She was whiter than milk
He wasn’t Handsome
But he was loaded
And both had some drink
He waved at her
She smiled back at him
Then gave a nod and a wink
Within a matter of moments
They went for a wander
And he had tickled her pink ….
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Neville (
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Wow the speed of that beautifully rhymed romantic happening leaves me quite wordless Nev - - your pen paints such on-going scenes with a finesse that makes me naughtily wanting more....................x
....................................... Many thanks ... I am overcome my lady .... 🙂
entertainingly witty,
a skip - back to days
of eager pulses, with naught - but hunting season's blinkered vision
for banishing, lonesome evenings
.... thanks again L.B but really can't thank you enough .... Neville
That's me and her then. Notices subtle ending - I got me tickling-stick! Swoon! lol.
Be careful Orchidee .. but enjoy ........ and thank you for not pushing to the front of the queue 🙂
Must have been drunk to tickle her **** in a matter of a moment.
Nicely put together with easy flow and a big smiling finale.
.................... he could move like a tiger on Vaseline .. well once upon a time .. now more like an aging crow : ) many thanks DA my friend ..
.. Neville
I wonder if she wandered and was tickled by the fella,
when he wondrously presented a baton that outstretched her umbrella.
Okay, I quit. There's no humor like the original. Yes, your rhyme had me laughing. Thanks for that. - Phil A.
thanks my friend .. much appreciated .. Neville ..
Pink can become people out of the sun.
Andy
I am tickle and truly sir ... Neville
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening NEVILLE - Love the Poem ! Seems like although SHE was Shy of the Sun - the Lady liked *A Wee Drappy !* In my experience when a man is *LOADED* He doesnt need to be handsome too ! He had had a *Wee Drop too* Alcohol which *Maketh GLAD the Heart of Man* & *Available the Heart of Woman* ! So - It only took a wave & a smile & a nod & a wink ~ BINGO ~ C*est la Vie ! Thanks for Sharing
Love - Joy - Peace to You & Yours
Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat 🧡💙🤎
... Many thank you's Angela, I think you just about summed it up nicely .. Much appreciated and All Good Things to the three of ya ..
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