Summer’s End
My walks in the park are now laboured
The dapples, more darker now too
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There is a chill in the air, I once savoured
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Saying goodbye to summer as late as it is
Is simply no fun without you
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Author:
Neville (
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- Comment from author about the poem: ... a love song .. maybe
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Well you've gone and done it... you made me feel emotions. Damn you.
... Oops, sorry .. but I thank you nevertheless and muchly too ...
... Neville
Very good emotive write Neville.
Andy
Thanks Andy & wot a one it has been too dont'cha think .. certainly one that many will try to forget, but I very much doubt they ever will ...
Neville
A definite full stop to summer meteor-logically yesterday Neville bu wonderfully captured emotionally here for very different reasons, we have all pined this moment
I keep the sunglasses on that way no-one sees the tears
Thanks for todays... stay safe
hello stranger, I seriously hope you are well my friend .. and also seriously thank you for stopping by and considering these words ... yes, something of a bitter lament today I'm afraid but wot a bloomin summer eh .. one none of us is likely to forget in a hurry methinks ....
... Neville
One for the Poets?
A nice write Neville. Oops, not yet - me diary says Summer ends about Sept 22nd! I'm gonna think of it that way anyway.
and why not ... maybe it'll catch on ..... cheers n all that jazz .. have a great day Orchidee ...
... Neville
And Winter don't start until about Dec 22 - we got ages yet! Though time flies?
So.... Summer this year was not two days in June.... well, not only them two days!
A moving read Nev. - -Tender pathos follows your goodbye-to-summer aloneness in words only love could compose....................x
what a wonder you are with words dear Fay .... and I sincerely thank you for these fine examples 🙂
As a lover of words it is and always will be my pleasure to visit your gifted offerings dear friend.
When your heart is closing down and feeling like turning in on itself, it's not a good time to see the world's plantlife closing down too. Roll on spring and recovery.
bang on sir ...
ANGELA HERE - Thnaks for sharing Neville - Any SEASON is DREARY - Even SPRING! When you*re not with the one you LOVE ~ AMEN!
Love - Joy - Peace
Angela & Brian 🧡💙
There are those though that find beauty and contentment outside of any relationship .. but hey, let's not get our knickers in a twist .. I appreciate the visit .. All Good Things, to the three of ya 🙂
The end of summer, isolated and alone, with only darkening days to look forward to, can take the fun out of life. But, there's nothing like a good love song being created, to fill the time. Go for it.
You know what they say , " when you play Country Music backwards/"
You get your girl back, your dog back, your truck back, etc."
Keep smiling, it'll soon be Spring. - Phil A.
Ha ha ... I may just give that a try .. I used to love that old truck .. the dog was kinda cute too ..
am smiling me socks off Phil .. cheers
Neville
forgive my rudeness my friend, my mind read you words and got stuck - with your lines rearranged like this:
'My walks in the park are now laboured
There is a chill in the air, I once savoured
The dapples, more darker now too
Saying goodbye to summer, simply: without you'
wonderful write! (whatever way its read)
.... I kinda like it when a poem does that to one of my peers .. particularly one whom I have a lot of time for and respect ...
so thank you L.B .. I like your version too by the way ... Oh' and get posting some more my friend .. I seem to have visited all of those you have placed here so far ..
Neville
thank you for not taking offense,
I post Fridays and Mondays usually, I lack the talent you all posses to produce works of such quality - at your levels of productivity, I'll post an extra one this week since you so kindly requested
Hey .. neva put yourself down like that L.B .. it is hard to see one's own worth .. some of yours are priceless and I really dont need to say that .. but say as I find ... only psychopaths, narcissists and those with inflated ego's put themselves on pedestals .. I am away for a few days so may have to catch ya new one/s on my return ... stay safe,
Neville
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