Olivia, what happened to your eyes?
I see the glitter in them no more
you were just chasing skies
Now you're resting on that shore
Olivia, tell me what's wrong?
What wrinkled that pretty face?
And that voice that's more like a song
It's kinda stuck at some place
Olivia, look at the sky
Birds are inviting you over
How come will you still cry?
Tears'll only make you older
Olivia, let's climb a rooftop
Maybe you feel liberty again
Maybe time would finally stop
No more counting one to ten
Olivia, you're closer to the end
Make sure you take a look around
Make sure your time is well spent
Time ain't shy, it fears no sound
Olivia, I enjoyed with you the talk,
Take good care oh of your heart
Enjoy the last steps of the walk
Which might only... be the start.
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Author:
mazen.safadi (
Offline) - Published: August 26th, 2020 13:37
- Category: Letter
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BRIAN HERE (I share this site with my WIFE ANGELA) Good Evening MAZEN ~ Welcome to MPS - It is a proactive site which operates by reading & commenting on each outhers Poems - OK. Please visit our site ~ Thanks A & B.
Then you for your first Poem - which is very elegantly penned ! Six balanced Quatrains with a consistent abab etc rhyme pattern ! The Subject is interesting the inevtable effect of the passage of time on ones ~ Eyes - Skin - Voice & readiness of Tears ! I often ask myself how will I cope in 50 Years time (Im 37) when my TIME comes & my HEART almost ceases to beat. Thanks for a very Thought provoking POEM in the form of a LETTER - More please !
Love - Joy - Peace
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙
The best part about writing poetry is the connection it creates between people from different sides of the world.
Thank you for the very lovely comment!
Looking forward to read more of what you write.
Lovely couple 🧡
May that start of new life be there forever.
Welcome to MPS.
Amen 😊
Thank you 🙏🏼
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