Hiss Undone.

Those dreams mislead you
As you sail into the darkness.
The blackened dream attacks,
Attacks your mind and heart.

That dream is a nightmare
Of your distant past
But into the future
The joy of good life
Will be before you
Where your joyful dreams
Will forever last.



    ANGELA HERE - God Sunday - Uncle Andy ! Thanks for the VIDEO! I love SKELETONS and have one called FRED (who wears a Top Hat & a Bow Tie) in my OFFICE ! Understanding the Human Skeleton & All its Joints & how they function is a very impotant aspect of my JOB as a PHYSIO! Some of My Clients (recovering from fractures etc) - who have never seen or handled a full size Human Skeleton - are quite surprized at both its complexity & simplicity ! Sometimes if Im going out to give a talk I strap FRED in the Front Passenger Seat! He causes quite a stir if I pull in for PETROL!
    We enjoyed UNSUBS POEM & your response. Thanks for re-sharing.

    Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
    Love Angela - Brian - Smokey 🧡💙🤎

  • Fay Slimm.

    A caring assurance that joy lasts forever when demons are chased away - thanking you Andy for this positive verse.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Fay, yes joy does last forever.


    • dusk arising

      We all have strange dreams now and again. Our friend Unsub has a panchant for writing poems and songs which can be quite disturbing.

      I'll have a go one day..... let me see, its sunday isn't it.

      • Goldfinch60

        I have written poems like this and the occasional one still pops to mind.

        Don't go out tonight!


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