Chimerical.
Who, having heard the very first whisper
of sonorous change as it catches the drift
and tremulous breeze starts piped quiver
in musical metal will reject those myriads
of toning jingle made by my wind-chimes.
Who, having harkened to hovering rustle
in trees as they warily take up the notes
will not need to catch playful air currents
portray leafy chatter, as pressure rotates
to tuned tinkle made by my wind-chimes.
Who can ever explain that mystical draw
of transfixing pleasure when the rhythm
resonates in time with buffets and before
pealing ceases yet another timed singing
erupts inside my chimerical wind-chimes.
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Fay Slimm. (
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... there is something rather ethereal about the sound of distant or hidden wind chimes, methinks ...
... meknows you have captured the essence of it here .....
Ah - good morn to thee mi amigo and so glad thou likest the wind-chime chimera that fascinates my fancy enough to try capturing its essence. Thanking you muchly and more for your luverley comment.
Ha! Honorable tinklings upon breeze announce back door left open. Maybe perhaps robber enters and clever Missy has subtlety alarm system installed. Inscrutable!
CHIMERA - A Mythical Creature of Several Creatures (Notes) an apt appelation for A WIND CHIME !
Good Morning FAY on a Sunny Sunday. How is Cornwall - showing & sharing its Autumness ?
Love the POEM - we too have *A Windchimes* in our Garden - very soporiphic al fresco in the Evening with a *Glass of Rioja* while my House Husband is preparing the Dinner!
Love all the *bons mots* in you elegant *Tone Poem* Sonorus - tremolous quiver - toning jingle - whisper - hovering rustle (of leaves in harmony !) - playful air-currents - tuned tingle - mystical draw - transfixing pleasure - rhythm resonates! As I read your Lyrical Poem I could sure hear those CHIMERI !CAL WIND CHIMES ~ AMEN !
BLESSINGS & Joy & Peace in all things
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛💛💛
Your poem is enjoyable, free flowing and clear language. It resonates a universal theme everyone can relate with. Very refreshing for a beautiful Sunday!
Good write Fay.
The sound of those chimes always remind me of sitting out in the garden on a fine summers evening with my beloved Joyce. Thank you for the memory Fay.
Andy
encapsulates the mysticism qualities of wind chimes wonderfully,
great write
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