Beyond the shadows of the cold
A delicate flower to hold
There lives a blossom of the heart
Whose petals never fall apart
A delicate flower in bloom
Fragrant and so sweet her perfume
Silky and smooth her delicate parts
Whose petals never fall apart
With the deepest of affections
her loving, a pure confection
No prickly thorns in her heart
Whose petals never fall apart
Beyond the shadows of the cold
Whose petals never fall apart
- Author: Dove (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: September 9th, 2020 06:41
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 29
Comments7
A good write, erm - is that you, Dove?! heehee.
Yes, this has been my other Pen name, for years!! You can call me Dove or Romantic One! And thank you!
Coooeeee, I recognised you then! lol.
ANGELA HERE - Good Afternoon ROMANTIC BLOOM (awesome name !) Thanks for sharing a very ELEGANT KYRIELLE SONNET ! Love the Rhyme Pattern aabB ccbB ddbB bB. Repetition is very important in Classical Poetry ! I will remember *Whose petals never fall apart* ! Thank for sharing.
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love A & B & Smokey Cat 💛💛💛
Thanks Angela, I just learned how to write one! And I have many more coming! Shadowpoetry.com. Has many styles of poetry and the rules with examples!
Best to the Trio!
Super construction in classic style verse.
I particularly like (and envy) the way you have taken the first line and placed it together with the repeating last line of each stanza to form the finale...
Thanks Dusk, I highlighted the line!
So that it would stand out! Just following
The rules,! It’s French, I’ll be posting a plain
Kyrielle, , and Rondelet, soon!
Thanks again
Beautiful words Romantic, or should that be beautiful romantic words.
Andy
Thanks Andy, thank you for stopping by!
Smilez!
Thanks Unsub, it’s a beautiful way of phrasing it! Glad my poem could relax you!
I usually like writing sad poetry, moving people’s heart’s! But I also like soothing romantic tones!
Anyhow hope you had a great day at work!
Thanks for the read and comment!
.. I dont know how or why I missed this little gem until just now .......... a real treat this wet n windy Saturday eve .. ❤️ 🙂
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