I feel I am full but not of me, the rest is yet to be seen
Words not my own, echo in my halls of voices
This programming I must shed before a new dawn arises
Poetry may bring light but not always action
This is where I begin to lose sight of the satisfaction
I can handle mine and you can handle yours
Maybe the only option left is to open our doors
Leaving all expectations the freedom to explore
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I have always been full but then aren't we all? May none of us wish to be something and just become what will be, there is actually no limits... Much peace and respect... I put this video on all my out let's and hope I can make a true difference I am here for!
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Very excellent words spoken. Great Write and spoken words in the YouTube video. Don
Thank you for time and definitely appreciate the listen, don't often do videos like that but as your request statement put it.. Where is the compassion!
Thank you again
Much peace and respect
Dunno why but today none of the videos on here are giving me audio so i cant hear what youre saying today.
Searching for answers was for me futile. All around were people, especially famous musicians, talking of finding themselves. But the harder i tried the less i found.
So i put it away and stopped looking, found something else to do.
There was no sudden realisation, no flash of inspiration but somewhere along the path of life i found myself... found what i am full of.
Why do i tell all this.... because i want to give u some advice... Stop looking... let it find you. I've told you before to write about things other than yourself .. why?.... because in writing about how you relate to other things, like trees, litter, race relations, brexit, pollution, and all the other crap.... you will find yourself because its all there already in your attitude to these things..... THAT'S YOU.... you're looking for you too fekkin hard mate.
Relax and tell me about the beaches, the fields... any bloody thing.
I can tell you about a right twat today that over took me on a bearly 30 road to then try and over take another.... I normally let it go but it was an insane move and makes think long and hard about keeping calm in a crazy world!
On top of that the new "laws" from Monday have caused people to disagree on a birthday for me and my girls 1st...
I can only see bs at the moment buddy and its just getting worse! Yet I know your seed will work and I can not deny it all sits well if the echos I hear in myself, if only we could take our own advice...
Maybe it will now it's from a soil I admire!
Always appreciate your time
I was actually gutted it didn't get more attention on my work page for that video...
It was a very sad moment to hear of a suicide over the worlds current state of affairs, in sure there's more suffering than we know my friend!
"Leaving all expectations the freedom to explore" such a wonderful truth in our lives Dan, freedom is there for us all.
Andy
If we let go of fear to take it my friend! Always appreciated!
brilliantly pro humanity, with a galvanising message of unity!
written and shared at a time when it can help so many stave-off that looming surge of dejection in 2020
Wow.. Now that it's a keeper and appreciate your vibration my friend! 2020 can still rock!
Much peace and respect
Keep up the write
The freedom to explore, wow you penned down a wonderful muse here.! Poetry is a light yeahh. Kudos!!
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
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